Translation Samples

Original Document

Translated Document

A native translator who is also a subject expert translates the original document

Cross Checked Document

The translated document is then checked by a cross checker for any translation errors

Comments

1Revision made to correct mistranslated term
2Revision made to correct mistranslated term
3Revision made to improve clarity
4Revision made to delete mistranslation
5Revision made to correct mistranslated term
6Revision made to correct mistranslation and add missing content
7Revision made to correct mistranslation
8Omitted text added
9Omitted text added
10Revision made to improve language clarity
11Mistranslation

Reviewed/Edited Document

The cross checked document is then reviewed by an editor who improves the language to ensure better flow

Comments

1In American English, double quotation marks are used.
2Revision made to correct mistranslated term
3The use of “such as,” “for example,” and “including” to introduce a list implies that the list is incomplete and contains more items or variables.
4Once a term has been introduced with either italics or quotes, it need not be italicized or quoted at subsequent mentions.
5Change to maintain consistency in terminology
6“Additionally” implies “also” hence it is redundant here
7Revision made to correct mistranslated term
8Revision made to improve clarity
9Revision made to delete mistranslation
10This phrasing is incorrect as it uses both infinitive and gerund forms. It should either be “to meet” (infinitive) or “meeting” (gerund).
11Revision made to correct mistranslated term
12Numbers up to 9 are usually spelled out
13Article incorrect
14Revision made to correct mistranslated term and add missing content
15Text was shifted to the end of the sentence for better flow of language and clarity.
16Extra space deleted
17Wordy text deleted
18Revision made to correct mistranslation
19A "two-way process" implies that the process involves interaction between both parties.
20Using a comma in a "not only ... but also" construction is incorrect
21Omitted text added
22Omitted text added
23Change made for parallelism - all noun forms used
24Revision made to improve language clarity
25This is redundant as we are aware who the supporting behaviors are for.
26This information is redundant as “all these behaviors” implies the inclusion of all methods.
27Revision made to correct mistranslation

Final Document

The final document is then delivered to client